Firstly, may I say, you have done very well for your 1st Galaxy shot

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The glow on the right hand side of the image is normally associated with Amplifier Glow, it takes on a deep red appearance although it is normally confined to the lower right on the 350D. I suspect that the ambient temp was fairly high when you took the shot. As far as the banding is concerned, could be any number of causes, possible bad darks, could be a data lead running over a power source, banding is known to occure when a USB mouse is used on a laptop, could be a lot of things although I am leaning towards high ambient temp.
Were your Darks taken at the same temp and ISO as your Lights, how many did you take........ I would suggest around 15-20 is a good number. Your BIAS shots, if you use them, should be taken at the shortest possible exposure on your camera and at the same ISO as your Lights and Darks, once again, around 15 or 20 should be enough.
With your Flats, the camera must be in the same oreintation and focus position as when you took your Lights, with the 350D, if you can keep the Histogram around 1/3 to 1/2 to the right of the left hand edge they will do the job, once again, I would suggest around 15 to 20 Flats.
And has been mentioned, I would go for around 10 or so Light Subs, depending on your light pollution, I would probably go for 300-360 seconds.
All in all, an excellent first galaxy, there is a lot to learn, keep at it.
Cheers