Thanks everyone for the nice comments!
Rick, great suggestions on the noise and processing. I always want to push hard on the stretching to get at the faint stuff, and invariably fall foul of the noise limitations of the DSLR. Looks like a CCD is in my future

I used DBE, but you're right about the residual gradient. I should pay better attention to the results and residuals at that point!
Interesting about Abell 1111/ACO3998 - I'll look into that a bit more when I get back to my computer. Not easy to identify these clusters!
Colin, funny you should mention that method, it was exactly what I did between v3 and v4 of this image, the current version is plenty dark on phone and tablet screens, but still not all that dark on my laptop. It's hard with the noise to darken it enough without losing the fainter parts of galaxies.
Pete, it's a good question, answer is: not consciously, but this image had frames from three nights, sort of pseudo-dithering

. But may not be enough to get around the coloured pattern noise you can get with the dslr.