I love the foreground, that clump of ..?..what ever it is, looks rather alien and works well with the vast Milky Way above
To me though the Milky Way looks too bright and stark, almost over exposed

I think this would be a beautiful image if you displayed the Milky Way a little more subtly
I know it's sort of cheating... buuut cloning out the man made light dome there might work too
Still, a great image Mike
Mike