Hi Grahame,
That's a very respectable shot indeed - lots to see.
Could maybe use a bit more contrast, like you said to bring out some more detail, if that's your thing - it all depends on what you want to highlight.
The theory I go by is that, on first impressions of an image, the eye is drawn to the areas with the smallest details, so shrouding small detail somewhat draws the eye to larger structures. It's not necessarily a bad thing.
One thing I was wondering about the star colors though, there seems to be an over-representation of yellow stars, with not a red star in sight. Might there be a reason why this is the case? The spectrum range (in RGB) where yellow stars actually turn up really looking yellow is very narrow, so you don't tend to see many. If this is not a pure RGB image then, of course, all bets are off
Cheers,