OK, not entirely happy with my first attempt at this DIY studio lighting, rather than process it again, I shot it again, keeping in mind a lot of different opinions of advice I have received in the last day.
I applied a couple of little "extra" tricks for a very similar picture, but changed somewhat from the original. I tried a portrait crop as well as the original landscape presentation.
So here you go. Derek Zoolander gave you "Blue Steel" and, "Magnum"....
Without further ado, I give you, "FULL METAL JACKET!"
Constructive feedback most welcome!
Baz.