Mmm... delicious nebula... hehe.
Very nice image Hugh, seems like your setup is working just fine

I prefer the first image, and a small change in colour balance will help bring out the details. Also perhaps try using curves to reduce the highlights, they're a little blown out from the faint stuff. Or alternatively, just select the core in photoshop (if you have it) and reduce its brightness. Not sure if lightroom allows you to 'spot' adjust histograms