Some good detail here for your first. However focus is a little out or your collimation is out. Seeing can also affect your ability to image. Check Thierry Legaults (web page for definitions of seeing and collimation) Also check Damien Peachs website at
http://www.damianpeach.com/index.htm . He has some really informative articles there.
Focus, can be achieved with a hartman mask, but I think you will find that focus can be achieved by looking at the screen and going in and out of focus. Nights of good seeing make this easy, on nights of bad seeing it will take some time. As for your settings, they are probably right given that your scope is quite fast. You have the right idea about freezing the image. So just play around a bit to find what works for you.
You might consider removing the shorty barlow and just using the 4x. With that much glass you will be getting some distortions and a huge loss of detail. Less is more sometimes.
Good first try.