nice start chris
it looks a bit dark / monochrome - as raymo says its is probably the iso (or perhaps f-stop) here is a good guide for night scapes
http://www.mikesalway.com.au/nightsc...phy-101-intro/
i had a quick edit in PS to see what i could do. it can take a tiny bit of stretching in curves and you should boost the saturation to bring some star colour and milky way (and carina neb) out but not much due to - i think - the capture settings.
cheers
russ