A lovely image hagar,
youve still got a bit of your 200kb limit to work with when you use the Save for Web in photoshop keep an eye on the file size - take it to the limit.
This is probably the best processed image youve done -well recently, im struggling to think of them all as youve done a few

, so you are definitely getting some technique there (perhaps you could redo your M16 with a similar technique)
this image certainly makes me want to have a go at it.