As you did ask.... (just a 'sec while I place my Judging wig on my scone)
I won't even charge for the sage advice
Stars are a little soft and do not show much colour variation. The local contrast enhancement has been applied too harshly IMHO.
Tracking well handled, evident from the round stellar profiles. While the narrow field is dramatic, the outer nebulosity and dust lanes have been cropped out ( sure, chip size and focal length can only give you so much. That said, a mosaic would get it all in).
M8 being so bright, I'd question was narrow band the best choice here?
LRGBHa might have been a better way to showcase the beautiful and subtle H-alpha + H-beta emissions and dust regions of this popular object.