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Originally Posted by Sausageman
I haven't sent it yet, I will wait for some constructive critisism first.
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Well done! Just a couple of suggestions:
... the whole of the front of the telescope needs protection (not 'protected')
"The office of fair trading" should be capitalised, i.e. The Office of Fair Trading
also I think this might be better:
".. an eyepiece filter will NOT stop the dangerous ultraviolet and infrared component of sunlight, and is very liable to splinter with disastrous consequences for a child's eyesight."
Aslo, we need to be on solid ground with this matter. It looks to me like the company is called "Wow Sight and Sound" not just '"Sight and Sound".
Their website is at
http://www.wowwicked.com.au and they are listed on the ASIC website as follows:
Extracted from ASIC's database at AEST 22:06:19 on 22/02/2007
Name WOW SIGHT & SOUND
Registered state/no. QLD BN18569171
Type Business Names
Registration Date Unknown
Next Review Date Unknown
Status Registered
Principal Place of Business not available
Jurisdiction Office of Fair Trading, Queensland
I looked through all 24 pages of their online catalogue tonight (starting
http://www.wowwicked.com.au/catpages/page1.htm ) and couldn't see any telescopes listed. Are we sure they're still selling them? I recall someone said it was only in the printed version, so is this still in circulation?
Also, did a bit of digging around and came up with this:
http://www.motorsm.com/motorsport/au...pr_2006/03.asp
"The 'WOW' factor comes to WPS Racing (March 15, 2006): WOW Sight & Sound's National Retail Director Con Nicolas today announced the company has agreed to a long-term sponsorship agreement with WPS Racing."
So now we now who their director is, or was!
I'm not a legal person, but surely there's some sort of 'duty of care' for companies and their executives, and if the latter can be contacted directly they then cannot say they didn't know if the worst happens to one of their customers.
However I only found one link to a 'Con Nicolas' in Victoria (which may be the wrong person, so I'm not posting it here for the moment).
It IS very frustrating to have all this progress so slowly, but it's worth keeping on even if this particular company has given up with these goods. It'll surely come up again some other time, some other place.