Welcome Jesse.
Lovely first pics with great detail. Very well done - particularly at that image scale!
As far as feedback is concerned mostly what they really need is a bit more colour. I suspect that's nearly all in the processing which you'll get better at with practice.
I don't use PixInsight myself but I'm sure there are others here who can offer some advice on that front.
Last edited by Retrograde; 16-09-2015 at 03:53 PM.
Reason: clarity
A fairly simple way to boost colour saturation in PI is to extract a copy of the Luminance from your colour image, use HistogramTransform to clip the blacks, apply this as a mask to your image and then use CurvesTransform to boost the Saturation curve.
The advantage of this technique is that the saturation boost is applied more strongly to bright areas and not at all to the background (which you removed by black clipping the mask.)