A good attempt but a few issues that you would need to correct.
Aside from the tilt issue in your image with the elongated stars in the corners, shimming can fix that, there are minor processing issues.
First of all you image is black clipped. Most people when learning to process end of up doing this for two main reasons. Firstly, because they are trying to hide noise in the background because the image is not exposed for long enough or there are not enough subs. Secondly, people clipped because they don't know about some of the features in photoshop that help prevent this. Try using the shadows and highlights tool under image adjustment or the curves function to lighten the image. That will help. Be careful to use these sparingly.
Next, your stars are basically devoid of colour. There are thousands of yellow stars and some prominent blue stars. This comes down to saturation.
Try taking a look at these links for help on processing.
http://www.astropix.com/HTML/J_DIGIT/TOC_DIG.HTM
http://www.imagingdeepsky.com/Presentations.html
Take your time on learning the tools of processing. Gathering good data is just part of the equation and processing is the other part.
I look forward to seeing your images improve over the coming months and year.