Hi Peter,
As others have said, there looks to be more than you need in the chain there (but that's just a newbie guess on my part).
I've also just started to try and get shots through a telescope and had exactly the same trouble as you. Initially I couldn't see anything but noise through live view.
As Russell said, the moon was a far easier target to begin with. Plenty of light and easy to focus on. I had no trouble there.
With live view of general stars it was just persistence. The regular lens found focus at a completely different position and I had to slowly work through the range before I found the sweet spot. This wasn't helped by the weight of the camera affecting the efficiency of the adjuster, until I changed the tension a bit.
I also experimented with different ISO settings (1600 was a good starting point) and exposure times (much shorter than I first thought - only a couple of seconds through my 150/750 Newtonian). I had almost given up on getting live view to work at all, when - bingo - I found the right spot. It also helped to boost the image magnification in live view. My camera gives the options of x5 or x10. x5 seemed good.
Keep experimenting and you should find it. Good luck. And