Well.. first of all... hello, welcome, and thanks for posting your images.
The good news is your focus doesn't look too bad, but I'm mystified how you've ended up with such dark images.
I use a 3x barlow with my 9.25 and jupiter is very bright. So a 2x in a C11 should be just about blinding!
First of all, we'll need to know what settings you are using at capture time. Particularly your frames per second, exposure (1/25th sec, 1/33rd sec etc) and what gain settings you are using.
The more info you give us, the more we'll be able to help.
We can look at what you are doing in Registax later.
Well done with your images BTW.