I like the wavy Ha, this composition looks similar to the shot in US S and T recently and I thought that was very effective. The blue looks monochrome for some reason and does not seem to be blended correctly. Been having some trouble like this myself with a project I am working on at present. It must be something to do with the blends in your shot. I think potentially this could be a show stopper but getting that blue under control will be a necessity for it to happen.
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