I'll have to read through those, but they seem alright
. But there are things that need to be ironed out in them and some things may and will change.
Despite the laudable nature of much of the document, it's still being formulated under the notions of national and transnational governments (e.g. the UN). Apart from what needs to be done in this instance with the oceans, we really need to replace the system we have first with something better before we can fully tackle these problems. Not that we shouldn't make a start...that we should've done already. However, it's going to be hampered by the sociopolitical/economic system we currently have in place. This will be, by necessity, a long term project.