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Originally Posted by mill
Sorry to say this but i have been reading the first bit and i have found many mistakes in grammar 
100 million men, women, and child. (children)
“The weapon will be launched within in the hour doctor, the orders have been through” (Take the in out).
There are many more mistakes and it makes reading at times difficult
I am not criticising your work but when writing a book, the grammar has to be right  . |
Aha, you couldnt be more right. its the first draft, im just happy to get it finished
i need to check over it over and over again mill before i start the next one
