Oh Alex, just to preempt you....I don't have the time at present to look this paper over properly, so don't think what I wrote is some definitive critique. It's not...it's just some of the mistakes I caught from a quick glance at the thing. You're going to have to wait till I have the time to be bothered looking it over before you get a proper response to it (it is 71 pages long!!!).
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