Not bad at all Adam,
I like the 2nd one better. I agree that it looks very similar to the view throu the eyepiece.
Well done.
Don't feel bad about forgeting the hartman mask on, I spent 10 minutes one night trying to focus on the moon using my 80ED with no luck !!!!!
Earlier in the day I was imaging the sun and had forgotten the solar filter in the front.
At least my eye was safe.