[bloodhound31]

Originally Posted by Octane

The first shot could do with some more depth of field (unless it's my eyes, the tip of the tower is soft). A little later in the evening, just on sunset would have been nice. H

Smaller Aperture?

Originally Posted by Octane

you have straight, drawing lines, in the second shot, they don't lead the eyes anywhere, really. The area above the building is blown as well (highlights). Again later in the evening, or dawn would do better for this composition. H

Yep H , as I shot it the side facing me was east. I knew immediately that this would be a better dawn building but I shot it anyway because it is so different and i was there. Andrew, thanks for the tip on leveling the steps.

Originally Posted by Octane

the third shot we can see the light is getting somewhat better in the area. A different perspective, perhaps shot from the ground up would have made for a better composition. H

I was on the ground. Closer then perhaps? My 18-55 is a bit limiting for architecture I think. A wider lens would be ideal no?

Originally Posted by Octane

Keep it up.
H

Thanks for your great guidance and encouragement. Maybe we should do a city shoot together?