No I wont post a redo Jase, I wouldnt dare
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Some obvious improvements might be though, based on my vast over processing skills, are .
Too many stars, way too many , who needs em, get rid of at least half.
Distort, minimise and nicely square up the ones left.
Add an edgy sharp effect on everything.
Push the noise way up, and bingo, the Fred master touch
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