O.K. that's a bit better. You have a good start there. Obviously, the first
one's composition is all wrong, but I don't suppose that you are worried about that at this stage. The obvious thing with both is the LP that you mentioned, but its not that bad. If you cut back on the exposure time, or knock back the ISO, or a bit of both, and stack lots of subs, you should get a really nice result.
If you can get to a darker site, experiment with exposure times, but I
would recommend cutting the ISO back to 1600.
raymo
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