Hi Alex,
very moving moment I'm sure.
One tip I would pass on is this ... never use 'fecund' in a poem.
Firstly, there's no way it sounds like a nice word; it doesn't even roll off the tongue smoothly. But mainly because there's only you on the whole planet knows what it means without googling it
Other than that, it's nice that this vision of loveliness moved you to write a poem.
If it wasn't your wife, then does your wife know about it?
If she does, I'd get the dog to taste test your coffee each day for the next week or so
Best wishes matey