Dear Mike, Geoff, Greg, Jase, and Marc,
This is fantastic assistance you are giving me! I really appreciate the effort and the comments. I did indeed use shadow highlights with this one, and all of the things you have noted are very valid, that I can see now that you have raised the issues. In my efforts to create something different / individual to what you usually see, I have pushed the boundaries too far.
Having these extra opinions is very helpful indeed.
Thanks so much !!
Cheers,
Tim