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Octane
19-05-2011, 12:29 AM
What more need be said?

Canon EOS 5D Mark II, Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L USM
1/800s f/5.6 at 200.0mm iso100

Larger version available here (http://users.tpg.com.au/octane2/i.html).

I love my camera.

Your comments and critique, are most welcome.

H

renormalised
19-05-2011, 01:44 AM
Wonderful subject for a photo....she's a very pretty young lady :)

Wonderful piccie :)

Octane
19-05-2011, 01:55 AM
Isn't she just? :love: :)

I'm preparing a portfolio for her out of my shots. Would love to work with her again -- have a few emotive image concepts in mind I'd love to realise.

Thanks for looking and commenting!

H

DavidTrap
19-05-2011, 08:50 AM
Nice and sharp H. Only comment I'd make is the stray hair below her left eye - easily touched up though.

DT

koputai
19-05-2011, 08:56 AM
Wow! Nicely done H.

Just to be really picky, I find that at the top right of shot, the
out of focus transition on the hat (scarf/whatever it is women
call these things) looks a bit too forced. But reall, great pic.

Cheers,
Jason.

Omaroo
19-05-2011, 09:05 AM
That's part of a rather large rock she's nestling in Jason. ;)

iceman
19-05-2011, 09:10 AM
Rofl!

koputai
19-05-2011, 09:50 AM
Oh yeah! That'd make a rather heavy hat! It looked like lace or something.
The OOF still looks a bit harsh in its transition.

Cheers,
Jason.

Octane
19-05-2011, 10:26 AM
Thanks, guys!

Mike, what you loling about? :P

David, definitely sharp -- this photo has been touched up to remove blemishes -- should see how sharp the original was. Razor blade style! I will remove the stray hair -- I did see it but left it. :)

Jason, Chris is correct -- it's part of the rock feature on the beach that she was sitting in at the time. The transition just shows how shallow f/5.6 is at such close range. I would have been just outside of 1.5m away from her (MFD). Do you reckon I should blur the rock feature a bit so that it's not as harsh?

Cheers, guys. :)

H

iceman
19-05-2011, 10:34 AM
Sorry H was ROFL'ing to Chris's comment to Jason. It's not a scarf, it's a rock :)

Nice portrait!

koputai
19-05-2011, 11:05 AM
No I don't think so. I guess it's just the way that 'I' look at it. To me
the rock sits there just like a fashionable hat or fascinator would.

A slightly wider crop would put the rock more in context.

Cheers,
Jason.

suma126
19-05-2011, 12:08 PM
mmm i can sit here with my coffee looking at her beautiful eyes all day. great pic H

renormalised
19-05-2011, 04:03 PM
She looks all of 16-17...makes you wish you were 25-30 years younger!!!:):P

Rick Petrie
20-05-2011, 01:05 PM
Great shot H.:thumbsup:
Hope you get to do more imagin' of Imogen.:P

rcheshire
20-05-2011, 06:55 PM
Leave the hair strand in.

Octane
26-05-2011, 11:17 PM
Shane -- me, too. Me, too. :)

Carl, I think she's in her early 20s. :)

Cheers, Rick. :)

Rowland -- oops -- I removed the stray hair. :)

H