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ourkind
18-04-2014, 01:41 AM
I find this image a little/lot confusing, part of me likes it and another part of me doesn't. Pretty sure I like the sky and colours but not loving the foreground. And I do like the tree reaching and poking its nose into the Milky Way. Sometimes you just gotta know when to trash a photo or just call it abstract art :question:
Thought's and CC's welcome.
higher res on flickr (https://www.flickr.com/photos/ourkind/13874355924/)
Thanks for looking.
dutch2
22-04-2014, 06:46 AM
I really like this one, the colours are beautiful and the composition is good.
Great job, well done.:thumbsup:
lacad01
22-04-2014, 07:15 AM
Hi Carlos, looks pretty good to me. What specifically about the foreground don't you like?
Astro_Bot
22-04-2014, 09:15 AM
Nice one, Carlos. :thumbsup:
The foreground looks a bit impressionist; like a Monet. It's different in texture (can't think of a better word this early in the morning) to the sky, but I don't mind it.
allan gould
22-04-2014, 10:12 AM
Like
ourkind
23-04-2014, 06:26 AM
Adam many thanks for the feedback! I think it's the two bushes in the middle that distract me. But it's growing on me. Cheers :)
Cheers Astro_Bot! I squared the crop to give it a canvas painting look, so at least that came across, great thank you!
Thanks Allan :)
gregbradley
23-04-2014, 08:54 AM
I like the composition apart from the fact that the primary colour is a green. So the overall effect is too much green.
Greg.
ourkind
30-04-2014, 03:48 AM
Thanks Greg I think you nailed it for me, I just couldn't see it before, too green! Cheers! :thumbsup:
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