There's always room for constructive criticism, but good on you for having a go Scott.
We have such variety of eyepiece quality and price these days that it's difficult to give a simple black and white recommendation. The problem I see with the Celestron eyepiece set is it's high price for what you get - cheap plossls still work ok if they're all one can afford.
Bold presentations aren't necessarily received so well on Aussie forums either - success is allowed down here, but you have to be humble about it.