OH, MAN, THAT'S THE WAY!
What a difference! Now you can really make out the texture along the teminator- peaks, valleys, crater lips. Even though they were there in the first sketch, NOW you can apprieciate them!
You've gotta be happy with this. And three different grades of pencil too.
The only other thing you could do to lift it more is either colour a wide ring around the field of view, or cut it out and paste it on black paper. Then you will really have the Moon on its own.
Only " a bit better "! It really has changed the entire aspect, just adding 'Space'.
Mental.